Final Edit.

My Final Edit of my thriller title sequence.

Story board

Establishing shot is used is to set the scene of the girl sat on the sofa casually on the phone to her friend.

This then moves into a long shot as the actress will stand and walk across to the fire place, this will show more of the location and a better sight of the actress.

 After a mid shot is used as the actress will stop at the fireplace and look at herself in the mirror, this gives a closer view yet you can still see the surroundings.

Mid shots are used to show the actress taking the luggage to the floor

 A close up will be used the show the suitcase being opened and the actress will remove items from within.

This goes back into a long shot showing the actress sat with the suitcase taking items out, leading to a shot reverse shot of being over the shoulder to view items closely to a long shot of her holding items.

This then leads to a close up of the newspaper placed on the floor

ending with a mid shot of the actress at the window.

After filming my draft, I realised it had not turned out how I had hoped. I filmed on two days outdoors, in very different conditions of sun and rain which was noticable in my film, unfortunately there was nothing I could do to change the weather its a factor I could not change. Also the camera was blurry as it was not of high definition, and when filming long shots they was a little unclear. The plot also had not gone to plan, as in my story board I wanted to drag the girl through the hedge, however this was un-possible and made the actions very un-realistic. Therefore I have decided to change my story and re-film. I began brainstorming and it was obvious that I wanted to film indoors so I had control, unlike being outside you cannot predict the weather. I decided on just having one girl actor who was in the previous film and she would act as a role of a baby sitter home alone, who comes across some perculiar items.

Draft edit